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Suppose this is a page from your diary．Write at least 50 words about what you did on May 1st this year．写一篇日记，记下你在今年五月一日的活动。要求内容切题，意思连贯。词数不少于50个，标点符号不占格。（共8分）
My Diary
Date：Tuesday May 1，2001
Time：9：30 p．m．
Weather：Fine
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考生作文
Date：Tuesday May 1st，2001
Time：9：30 p．m．
Weather：Fine
Today is a Tuesday．It's a happy day．People were very exciting．We had a
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party celebrate the Labour Day．Some students sang songs，some danced and
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played，and others played the football．But our parents were working．They very
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busy ．We enjoyed ourselves very much．
①去掉冠词a，星期名词前不用冠词。
②excitin g改为excited，exciting一般指事物“令人兴奋的”，而指人“兴奋的”应用excited。
③celebrate应改为to celebrate，动词不定式作目的状语。
④去掉定冠词the，球类名词前不加冠词。
⑤根据上下文此处应用过去时，改为still worked。
⑥此句结构不全，very busy前应加be动词were。 （上海市一考生）
简评：
该文内容切题，整体表达较流畅，但句子结构不很清晰，正确，出现了不少错误，有6处失分点。该文章得分4分。
参考范文：
Date：Tuesd ay May 1st，2001
Time：9：30 p．m．
Weather：Fine
Today is Tuesday．It's a happy day．People were very excited．We had a party to celebrate the Labour Day．Some students sang songs，some danced and played， and others played football．But our parents still worked．They were very busy．We enjoyed ourselves very much．
