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根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出句数不限。（共12分）
提示：
澳大利亚学生Sam最近来到北京，去了王府井，发现这里发生了巨大的变化，请你以Sam的身份给父母写一张明信片，介绍……
① happy，visit，again
②change，take place
③go，Wang Fu Jing Street，morning，building，shop market
④Howe，poster（宣传画），put，for，the Olympics
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Mr Larry King 36 Bridge Road
Richmond VIC 3132
AUSTRALIA
（2001北京东城区）
考生作文：
Dear Dad and Mum，
I'm very much happy to visit Beijing again．GREat changes were taken place in
失分点① 失分点②
Beijing．I went to Wang Fu Jing Street．There were a lot of beautiful buildings and
失分点③ 失分点④
shops and markets，I saw a lot of flowers on the street．And there are a lot of
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posters put on the wall for the Olympics．I had a good time．
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Sam
①very much改为very ，very much修饰动词，修饰形容词或副词应用 very。
②应改为have taken place，take place是不及物动词短语，没有被动语态，而且到“现在”为止发生了巨大变化应用现在完成时。
③were改为are，此处表示一个客观事实，用一般现在时。
④and应改为“，”，并列事物最后才加连词and。
⑤此句表达错误，应改为many posters are put on。
⑥此处添上Yours，或Yours loving son等结尾谦称。 （北京西城区考生）
简评：
此篇文章表达基本符合题目要求，表达较为清楚，但表达较为简单且语法错误较多，失分点不少。该文章得分为7分。
参考范文：
Dear Mum and Dad，
I'm very happy to visit Beijing again．GREat changes have taken place in here．Today I went to Wang Fu Jing Street early in the morning and I had a good time．Now，there are a lot of new buildings，modern shops and large markets in it．Many beautiful flowers and posters are put there．People in Beijing are working hard（bidding）for the 2008 Olympics．I hope they 'll have good luck．
Yours，
Sam
