根据中文意思和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段,所给英文提示词语必须都用上,中文提示内容不必逐句翻译,每组英文提示所写的句数不限。(共12分)
提示:
今天是6月23日,星期日,天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了北京动物园。那里的动物十分有趣,人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在给猴子喂食物时,就上前阻止并说……
请你用英文写一篇日记,记述今天的经历。(请注意日记格式)
①fine day,sun,bright
②visit,Beijing Zoo
③animal,so interesting,people,love
④see,visitor,throw ..to,stop,say
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(2002年北京东城区)
考生作文:
Sunday June 23rd
It was fine 失分点①day today and the sun was bright.I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate,Zhang Hong.The animals there were very失分点② interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys.I went to stop him and said,“Animals are our friends and we must look after them.”
①fine前面应添上不定冠词a,另外,在文章右上角应说明天气情况。
②very改为so,表示“如此……以致于”用结构so...that。
(东城区一考生)
简评:
本篇文章得分10分,满分12分。文章符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,行文流畅,但出现了少量语言及格式错误。
参考范文:
Sunday June 23rd Fine
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate,Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys,I went/ran to stop him /her and said,“Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”