根据图文提示,写一篇50—60个词的日记。(10分)
假设你在公园看到了下图所示小女孩的行为,你会怎么想?请把它写在日记里。
要求:
1)语言规范,意思连贯,表达完整。
2)记叙事件之后要有个人感想。
参考词:
香蕉皮banana skin;保护protect vt.;扔throw(threw,thrown)vt.;行为 behavior n;环境environment n;阳光充足的sunny adj.
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(2002辽宁省中考题)
考生作文:
2002,May 6 Sunday Sunny 失分点①
Today I go 失分点②to a park.When I am playing失分点③,I see失分点④ a girl.She is eating失分点⑤.After eating,she throws失分点⑥ some banana skins on the ground.
I think it's a bad behavior.We shouldn't do like that.We must protect environment and make our environment clean.
①日期写法有误,一般顺序为“月、日、年”,故改为星期May 6,2002。
②写日记一般应用过去时态,故go改为went。
③am playing改为was playing。
④see改为saw。
⑤is eating改为was eating。
⑥throws改为threw。
(辽宁一考生)
简评:
本篇文章得6分,满分10分。该文章基本能按题目要求写作,语句通顺,想象较合理,但文章错误不少,主要是对日记所用的时态没把握好。
参考范文:
May 6,2002 Sunday Sunny
Today I went to a park.When I was playing,I saw a girl.She was eating bananas.After eating,she threw some banana skins on the ground.
I think it's a bad behavior./I think it's bad for her to do that.We shouldn't do that.We must protect the environment and make our environment more beautiful.