根据画面内容和文字说明,写一段50—80个单词的对话。(10分)
要求 :
1)对话内容包括事件发生的时间、地点、原因、结果以及警察的建议和劝告。
2)要点齐全,表达正确,符合语境和逻辑。
对话内容开头已给出:
(P:policeman L:Lin Tao)
P:What happened ?
L:My bike hit a car.
P: ____________________________
L: ____________________________
P: ____________________________
L: ____________________________
(2002陕西省中考题)
考生作文:
P:What happened ?
L:My bike hit a car.
P:Are you hurt bad失分点① ?
L:Luckily I am n ot.
P:What about your bike?
L:It is not broken.
P:That's good.When has it happened 失分点②?
L:About twenty min utes ago.
P:Where did it happen?
L:Around the corner near my school.
P:How did it happen!
L:I rode too fast when I saw a car come to me.I tried to stop,but my bike still hit the car.
P:Well.Please be careful.Don't ride too fast.It is very dangerous.
L:Thanks a lot!
P:OK.Goodbye!
L:Bye!
①bad改为badly,修饰动词用副词。
②when不与完成时连用,常跟过去时,故改为did it happen。
(陕西一考生)
简评:
此题为平开性书面表达题,考生能根据要求,依照画面所提供的信息,编写的对话中对事故发生的时间、地点、原因、结果以及警察的建议和劝告,符合逻辑,条理清楚,尽管出现了少量语言错误,但不失为一段较好的对话。该文章得分9分,满分为10分。
参考范文:
P:What happened ?
L:My bike hit a car.
P:Are you hurt badly ?
L:Luckily I am not.
P:What about your bike?
L:It is not broken.
P:That's good.What time did it happen?
L:About ten minutes ago.
P:And where?
L:Around the cornern ear my school.
P:How did it happen?
L:Perhaps I was riding too fast when I saw a car coming to me.I tried to stop,but my bike still hit the car.
P:Well.Please be careful when you are riding.Don't ride too fast next time.It is very dangerous.Take care of yourself!
L:Thanks a lot!
P:OK.Goodbye!
L:Bye!